WWW: Clear information given, about the conventions shown in the opening and you begin to say why they have been used. EBI: Try to always develop your analysis to say why these features have been used - ie. why they have only used the carousel as the setting - link to innocence, family, children, happiness etc - to highlight the danger, sadness.
NSE
Improvement:
My first powerpoint of face off was very brief. Knowing this i decided to re-do the hole powerpoint. When doing this i made sure i went into as much delail as possible. I also added picture examples to also go into further detail. I went into more depth on the setting and why its used the way it is and also themes.
nshuttle6 October 2013 09:17 
EBI: Try to always develop your analysis to say why these features have been used - ie. why they have only used the carousel as the setting - link to innocence, family, children, happiness etc - to highlight the danger, sadness.
NSE